This might be the first thing I made that I don't completely hate. c': Anyways this is for ~animefreak29, this is her OC Toxic, I couldn't draw the radioactive symbol the his leg because of the position he's in so I decided to place one right next to him. cx Uhh I hope I improved on wolf anatomy 'cause I suck at it.
*NOOB CRITQUE IS A NOOB* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ VISION: its so purtyyyyy, you may need to work on anatomy, and paws ill send you a guide my friend gave me through skype :3
ORIGINALITY:well, lets face it, the pose is commonly used x3
TECHNIQUE: I can't work with thin lineart, plus how you did the eyes was purrfectttt
IMPACT: ,,,,*lookit originality*
IM SORRY IF THIS IS TOO HARSH Q.Q I DIDNT SUGARCOAT ANYTHING, THIS IS HONEST ;; OKAY 100 WORD MINIMUM UHHHHH I LIKE KARKAT aND WAFFLES AND AREEZ AND DONUTES AMFDKLGNRFDKHNGD:SMHGK GFHMDF:LHMK:G NEED MORE WORDS UHHHHHH PIEACE OF DUCK SHUT THE FRIDGE DERE 100 WORDS :"D
Lol i'ma put this in a comment and not a critique because this piece is perfect. Absolutely perfct. The only things I see That you could improve are that the tail needs to be lower down because it kinda looks like its attatched to its back XD, your missing some shading, and the back feet look a little.... different from a normal cats. X3 I LUV TEH EYES AND KEEP THE FRONT FEET THE WAY THEY ARE, BECAUSE DERE AWESOME. dats it. GOOD DAY TO YOU FINE SIR.
I really am..
Don't judge me..
Eek..
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Vision:
(Like Kitty said)You may need more practice on anatomy but for now if you are bad at it just cover it up with the tail or something.Originality: I love how you did the pose! Commonly used a lot, Like me. x3
Technique: I love the lineart, So smoothe. I especially love the glow around the body!
What I am trying to say:
I looove everything about this drawing of yours and I am excited to see more drawings so I can see improvements!
I like glowie stuffzSorry I was aiming at 100+ words xD~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
VISION: its so purtyyyyy, you may need to work on anatomy, and paws ill send you a guide my friend gave me through skype :3
ORIGINALITY:well, lets face it, the pose is commonly used x3
TECHNIQUE: I can't work with thin lineart, plus how you did the eyes was purrfectttt
IMPACT: ,,,,*lookit originality*
IM SORRY IF THIS IS TOO HARSH Q.Q
I DIDNT SUGARCOAT ANYTHING, THIS IS HONEST ;;
OKAY 100 WORD MINIMUM UHHHHH
I LIKE KARKAT
aND WAFFLES
AND AREEZAND DONUTES
AMFDKLGNRFDKHNGD:SMHGK
GFHMDF:LHMK:G
NEED MORE WORDS
UHHHHHH
PIEACE OF DUCK
SHUT THE FRIDGE
DERE
100 WORDS :"D
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